Now that I’m done with edits for the fourth book, I have some time to post about the name changes for The Legends of the First Empire books. Let’s start with the names of the books themselves. Here are the original names along with the names the books will be released as.
- Rhune >> Age of Myth
- Dherg >> Age of Swords
- Rhist >> Age of War
- Phyre >> Age of Legends
- Fhrey >> Age of Empire
Let me start by saying, most authors have “working titles” and that is what the original names were. The name they ultimately come out with come with a great deal of thought from the publisher, author, and booksellers.
When I originally named the books, I had a few things in mind:
- I wanted short one word titles because it allows for making those titles really easily visible on thumbnails of the books
- I wanted the words to be “made up” because one word titles of “real words” is almost impossible to get traction on. Type “Wizard” into Amazon’s search for books and you get 51,615. That’s not a made up number. I just did it and by the time you try it may be more.
- I wanted consistency between the titles – notice all of them are 5-letters and have “H” as the second one.
These working titles had a number of problems.
- First, the don’t mean anything. Do you know what Rhist is? How about Dherg? Do you know how to pronounce Phyre? Is it “Fire,”,”Pyre,” or “Fear”? After reading the books the names make some sense (Rhune< Dherg and Fhrey are races in the series and Rhist is a person and a place and Phyre is one of the realms of the afterlife). But on first glance no one will know what they are – they are just five letters strung together without any context.
- Second, many people won’t know how to spell the books. They’ll type Rist rather than Rhist (or maybe even Wrist) when they hear from a friend about that new “Rist” book from Michael J. Sullivan. Having unconventional spellings makes it difficult for people to find them.
- Some of the titles are already used: Rhune – came out May 31, 2013 by Lynn Leite. There are nine books with Phyre in its title. Melissa Wright has a very popular Frey Saga of books and the first one is called Frey.
These are pretty serious problems. But I’d be willing to live with them if I couldn’t come up with a better alternative. Luckily I could. Here’s my process for renaming the books.
- When I was doing names for Riyria I really liked that the consistency of three words with “of” in the middle. So returning to that paradigm seemed like something to pursue.
- I also liked that the Riyria books had great contextual meaning. Theft of Swords was about — well the theft of two different swords. Rise of Empire was about — you got it an Empire that is taking from and Heir of Novron…well it concludes the great mystery about who really is Novron’s Heir.
- The names of the Riyria books clearly place them in the “fantasy” realm. We use words like “Swords” and “Heir” and “Empire” these make it easy for people to immediately classify the books. Always a positive thing.
For the new books, I thought about what was at the core of each one and could I provide context while still keeping consistency…all while avoiding “made up words” which are difficult for all kinds of reasons. So here’s the context behind each of the new titles.
- Age of Myth – at its core is about the effects on a culture when they realize the difference between myths and reality. Not only are their core beliefs shattered but it means they’ll have to rely on themselves to insure the continued existence as a race.
- Age of Swords – The Rhune in the First Empire books are a primitive people. They use spears and wooden shields, rarely see domesticated horses, and are just barely above hunting and gathering. To survive, they are going to have to find new technology and materials that will make it possible for them to fight against a vastly superior race. How they come about “sword technology” is an important event in the history of these people.
- Age of War – shows the events when the two cultures from the first two books finally meet in battle. It explores how the underdogs can strike out against a vastly superior enemy and what sacrifices are necessary. This paradigm has played out many times throughout history and I was excited to put my own spin on how such a clash would effect my world of Elan.
- Age of Legends – From day one of this series I was playing with the notion of “Myths and Legends” the difference between people we look at as heroes and the reality of their deeds. I also wanted to explore how ordinary people do extraordinary things. Royce and Hadrian are awesome because they are so capable, but they are nearly superheroes in their capabilities. What happens when people who are just “people” can they rise to the status of Legends without special capabilities? That is the primary focus of this book so it seemed like the perfect title. Well, to be honest, I thought the prefect title was Age of Heroes but I was afraid people would think I was trying to ride on Brandon Sanderson’s coat tails since he has a book called The Hero of Ages. So Age of Legends was a good second choice.
- Age of Empire – This series of books tells the part of Elan’s past where the First Empire is created by the legendary demigod Novron. Of course the story arc has to end with eventual forming of that empire, so, Age of Empire is the logical choice for it. The only issue…a popular game by that name – one of my favorites. But hey you can’t get everything the way you want it and conflict with a game is better than conflict with a book.
Just like the Riyria books we have titles that are (a) contextually accurate (b) have consistency and (c) use words that identify them as fantasy (swords, legends, myths, war, etc).
One last thing I should bring up. Names of books are not something that authors usually get to have a say in, but Del Rey has been very accommodating with me on all kinds of fronts including the names. They didn’t veto my original names and put in their own. They raised what their issues were with the original names and asked if their concerns had merit. I felt they did. Then, then asked me if I could come up with some names that would solve their problems and I’d be happy with – and these are what I came up with. I liked them and I’m glad they did as well.
So, that’s the story behind how and why the names changed. No publisher conspiracy or arm twisting. I know some of expressed they don’t like the new names, but I think that is largely due to being exposed to the other names first. If we had started out with the “Age of” titles and then switched to the 5-letter titles, I think we would have similar push back. You like what you get used to.
Thanks for sharing all the considerations that went into the titles. I think a lot of people believe titles just magically come to a writer’s mind. Pretty great the publisher let you work it out. I like the ‘Age of….’ titles. Now if only I could get my hands on them quicker.
Thanks Susan. I liked both sets of titles — should because I came up with them. But I think the new ones will be much easier for people to find the books.
Thank you for your insights on choosing the titles. To be honest I like the new titling scheme more than the original one. I’ve got a soft spot for “epic-ness” and the new titles are just perfect!
On a different subject, please, make the series available in Google Books as well. I am still waiting for Death of Dulgath to appear there…
Hey there. Glad other it. I don’t control distribution the new books, but my publisher has made it available there. So no problem on that front. As for The Death of Dulgath. I do control distribution on that title, and you are right, I’ve been avoiding Google play because they tend to discount books in a way I can’t control, and when they do all the other channels price match. Come the fall, the paperback version of The Death of Dulgath will be released, and we’ll lower the price on the ebook, so it’ll come into Google Play then. Also, you can always buy the ebook directly from my site, I discount it to $6.99 there, which is a savings of 30%.
Thank you, I really appreciate your answer (due to capital controls in my country not all e-payments are possible, google is one that works, that’s why I enquired specifically for them).
Ah, gotcha. We’ll Death of Dulgath will be in that one soonish – maybe around Sep or Oct.