Rhune Limited Edition Giveaways

Everyone loves limited editions…and this is about as limited as it gets. Robin had the great idea of printing up a handful (10 copies) of the version of Rhune that will go out to the beta readers (and yes beta readers, she is still behind but getting closer to getting people picked and the beta released).  At this point, only myself and Robin have read the book in this state, and those who receive these limited editions will have a rare peak at the difference between the beta and the final version. Because these are beta versions, the books haven’t been copy edited, so expect a grammar issue here and there. That said, they have been gone over quite a bit already so the copies aren’t as rough as say a first draft.

To give away these copies I have several giveaways running:

  • Beta readers – 1 drawing will be made from those who filled out the survey. You don’t have to do anything else to be entered – you have a 1 in 418 chance to win (yes there were that many beta readers signed up!)
  • Goodreads users –  2 drawings will be made from an official goodreads giveaway. (If you aren’t yet a member of goodreads, you can sign up for free.) I have no idea how many entries there will be, but if past giveaways are any indication, it will probably be 1 in 800. After just one day there are 700 people entered so that estimate may be low. Here is the link to enter.

  • Dark Room member - 1 drawing will be made exclusively for member of The Dark Room (presently about 880 members).  Click on the link in the header to enter.  For those who don’t know, The Dark Room is a secret and private group where readers get access to special perks (like this one). If you aren’t a member and want to become one, send me an email (michael (dot) sullivan (dot) dc (at) gmail (dot) com – with the subject of DARK ROOM INVITE.
  • Everyone else – 1 drawing will be made from those who sign up for the Rhune early release notifications. Currently, there are 190+ people signed up. Here is a link to add your name to the list.

All drawings will be made at the same time (to make it easy for me to co-ordinate the shipping) 12:00 am EST on November 13. I should also mention all of the giveaways are open regardless of location…I’ll spring for the more expensive overseas shipping.

Good luck to all, and remember you can register for as many giveaways as you qualify for, so feel free to enter more than one.

 

We will be giving away 5 of these copies to some VERY lucky people.  Obviously, these copies won’t be the “final version

 

The Rhune Beta read is getting close…sorry about the delays but Robin was a bit overwelmed

Beta Reading, Writing Status, and Some Upcoming Events

I’ve set mid-November as the date to wrap Fhrey…and hence the entire First Empire series.  Fall is always my most productive writing time and now that I’m past the start of the book (I’m about 12,000 words in) things are going more smoothly and humming right along. I’m pretty confident I can hit that date.

Robin, on the other hand, is a bit behind on her edits for Rhune. She hoped to be in a position to have the book in beta readers hands today, but she still has another 25% to go. So a few more days on that. The good news is her edits continue to be minor and the book is holding together nicely.  It will be interesting to see what the beta readers say.

One other thing…my birthday is approaching.  I’ll be turning 53 in nine days and I want to do a bit of celebrating.  As such I’m going to make some VERY limited edition advanced reading copies of Rhune.  These are going to be essentially at the state of the beta read and there will probably only be 10 of them in the world.  I thought I would give them away and I think people will get a kick out of seeing what the book started out like and what it became.  I’ll be making an official post about the giveaways soon but for those that want to get in early…simply sign up for Rhune notifications at this link.  If you’ve already done so..well you are entered so nothing more for you to do.

Another Rhune update

I’m continuing to prepare for the fourth and final book, and if I’m on schedule will start writing it on Monday.  Everything is going nicely and I’m making sure that all the various threads come together in what I hope will be a satisfying conclusion. Meanwhile, Robin has been co-coordinating with the beta readers.  Her spreadsheet has 557 entries on it.  Yes you heard that right.  The next step is for everyone who raised a hand to fill out the survey. This is what we’ll be picking the beta readers from. She’s using Mail Chimp to send out notifications, and some messages have gone to spam folders. If you haven’t got your survey invitation, then send a mail to first.empire.beta@gmail.com as she’ll be closing that process soon. She’s also made some progress on the alpha edit of Rhune.  Here is where we stand now:

Rhune

  • Written: Feb 2013 – July 2013 (100% complete)
  • Pre-alpha edit: July 24, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Read: July 29 – 31, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Edit: Aug 2, 2014 (40% complete)
  • Beta #1 Start: Sep 2014 (names gathered, surveys coming in)
  • Beta #2 Start: Jan 2015 (0% complete)

Dherg

  • Written: Aug 2013 – Dec 2013 (100% complete)
  • Pre-alpha edit: Aug 14, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Read: Aug 8  – Aug 14, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Edit: Sep 2014 (0% complete)
  • Beta: To be determined

Rhrist

  • Written:Jan 2014 – June 2014
  • Pre-alpha edit: Aug 14, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Read: Sep 1 – 3, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Edit: Nov 2014 (0% complete)
  • Beta: To be determined

Fhrey

  • Outlining and planning: August 2014 (80% complete)
  • Writing: Sep 2014 – Dec 2014 (0% complete)
  • Pre-alpha edit: Jan 2015 (0% complete)
  • Alpha Read: Feb 1 – 3 2015 (0% complete)
  • Alpha Editing: Feb – Mar 2015 (0% complete)
  • Beta: To be determined

I’ve also started a mailing list for those who are interested in freebies, pre-ordering, contests, and other goodies.  You can sign up here.

It’s official!

Yesterday my wife finished reading the third book in the series and gave her enthusiastic stamp of approval. As pleased as I am with each book I write, I’m never 100% sure whether they are worth seeing the light of day until I get the thumbs-up or thumbs-down from Robin. Some might assume that she, being my wife and all, always gives the thumbs-up, but that is certainly not true. I have several novels and short stories that won’t see the light of day because the Quality Assurance Department here in our house has said, “Nope try again.”

So, Robin is currently putting some minor edits on the first book, and getting ready for the beta readers.  I’ll talk more about the beta process in my next post. But the good news is the series is in as Robin puts it, “Excellent Shape” and that is a huge hurdle to cross.

A long overdue update on The First Empire books

I can’t believe how long it has been since I’ve updated this blog.  I think you’ll be seeing more frequent updates in the near future. If you’ve kept up with the main pages of this site you’ll know that this series went from a trilogy to four books.  Here is where the series stands now:

Rhune

  • Written: Feb 2013 – July 2013 (100% complete)
  • Pre-alpha edit: July 24, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Read: July 29 – 31, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Edit: Aug 2, 2014 (27% complete)
  • Beta #1 Start: Sep 2014 (0% complete)
  • Beta #2 Start: Jan 2015 (0% complete)

Dherg

  • Written: Aug 2013 – Dec 2013 (100% complete)
  • Pre-alpha edit: Aug 14, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Read: Aug 8  – Aug 14, 2014 (100% complete)
  • Alpha Edit: Sep 2014 (0% complete)
  • Beta: To be determined

Rhrist

  • Written:Jan 2014 – June 2014
  • Pre-alpha edit: Aug 14, 2014 (30% complete)
  • Alpha Read: Sep 1 – 3, 2014 (0% complete)
  • Alpha Edit: Nov 2014 (0% complete)
  • Beta: To be determined

Fhrey

  • Writing: Sep 2014 – Dec 2014 (0% complete)
  • Pre-alpha edit: Jan 2015 (0% complete)
  • Alpha Read: Feb 1 – 3 2015 (0% complete)
  • Alpha Editing: Feb – Mar 2015 (0% complete)
  • Beta: To be determined

So as you can see, even though I’ve not been updating i have been busy writing. The alpha reader feedback for the first two books have been very positive and I don’t see much that has to be changed.  For those that are interested in beta testing, I’ll have a post for you soon on that process.

NanoWriMo ends – how did you do?

It’s over! Did you make it?  Did you try? Do you know what I’m talking about? I’m referring to National Writing Month, also known by those in the secret society of writers as NanoWriMo. For those that aren’t familiar, it’s the one month each year where authors are challenged to write 50,000 words. Generally speaking, it doesn’t matter what you write, or how good the result, the idea is just to get writers into the mindset of writing on a regular basis.

For most doing NanoWriMo it’s a challenging proposition. Mainly because most doing so are balancing a day job and “a life” which often includes significant others and sometimes younglings who still need to be fed and cared for even in the month of November. Plus there is the whole start to the holiday thing, which can eat into the time available when you are locked in a chair writing away.

To all those who tried and succeeded…Congratulations. To all those who tried and fell short, well good for you for making the attempt…and there is always next year.  Also, keep in mind that Scrivener (a great program for writing) has special discounts: 50% to all those who win, and 20% off for everyone else.

As for me, I wasn’t “officially” doing NanoWriMo as I was already 13,000 words into my current work in progress when November rolled around and technically you are supposed to start a new project.  But my yesterday word count was 63,580 so I did actually write 50,000 words this month, but I do this full time so that’s not all that unusual. (I try to shoot for 2,000 words a day). What makes these 50,000 words important is they are “finished” as opposed to just brain dumping.  Now that’s not to say that there won’t be editing when the book is all done, but they also aren’t stream of consciousness that is indicative of most NanoWriMo results.  I’ve already been over them several times during the writing and they are at the 90% completed stage that I produce during my first draft.

So although I’ve not updated much recently, progress is continuing. As with any of my writing I won’t know until it’s done whether it will die on the table or live on – but that’s why I write “full series” before  publishing anything.

That’s my update…how did others fare?

First chapter is looking good…

First chapters are really important for me…well they should be for every author, but I place a lot of emphasis on them. Some of my favorite openings have been:

* Theft of Swords: The Crown Conspiracy – the thought of Riyria being robbed and Royce giving the thieves advice for the future just seemed like a great, fun way to start out a book.

* Theft of Swords: Avempartha – I really liked Royce and Hadrian putting the squeeze on “DeWitt” for him setting them up.  I also liked the way that whole conflict resolved itself.

I’m actually thinking that the first chapter of Dherg may be my favorite so far.  I think I’m channeling a bit of “The Jester” by starting this chapter out with a great roller coaster ride…very reminiscent of the opening of Indiana Jones (one of my favorite movies).  So I’m pretty darn happy right now, and am going to get back at it. But just wanted to drop in update people about how book #2 is going.